tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19897529.post6660792911557681810..comments2024-03-29T03:30:42.787-04:00Comments on A Dark Planet: A short story.David Terrenoirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09482864941636273068noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19897529.post-82461579756722944112009-04-16T21:52:00.000-04:002009-04-16T21:52:00.000-04:00Wow-- those shoes are still there?!!? I found them...Wow-- those shoes are still there?!!? I found them separated in the parking lot MONTHS ago and put them together in the grass, hoping the owner would see them. I've been gone since January, and I know it was at least several weeks before that. Poor Cinderella's never found her missing shoes ...Beccanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19897529.post-5029685459779430662009-04-14T11:04:00.000-04:002009-04-14T11:04:00.000-04:00Here's my six-word story. Not as good as Papa's, b...Here's my six-word story. Not as good as Papa's, but I tried:<br /><br />"A mother, now childless, seeks divorce."David Terrenoirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09482864941636273068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19897529.post-20776886958903883412009-04-14T09:23:00.000-04:002009-04-14T09:23:00.000-04:00How about his one from Augusten Burroughs-
"Oh th...How about his one from Augusten Burroughs-<br /><br />"Oh that? It's nothing. Not contagious."RedTreehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13435074189289863204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19897529.post-30581681925126679682009-04-14T06:35:00.000-04:002009-04-14T06:35:00.000-04:00There's a book published on this very subject enti...There's a book published on this very subject entitled "Not quite what I was planning, six-word memoirs by writers famous and obscure." Pretty amusing.Milonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19897529.post-83531606716746870862009-04-13T19:54:00.000-04:002009-04-13T19:54:00.000-04:00The thing that is so good about his is that it mak...The thing that is so good about his is that it makes you ruminate. Too many six word sequences just explain a picture or idea: Grass between my toes, it's heaven. No story there. <br />Sorry, you made me think here. Always a bad thing.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19897529.post-58063791673156171222009-04-13T19:37:00.000-04:002009-04-13T19:37:00.000-04:00That's a challenge, Gary, I'll have to think about...That's a challenge, Gary, I'll have to think about it. It'll be tough to come close to what the old man did.David Terrenoirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09482864941636273068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19897529.post-66286185938254786852009-04-13T18:48:00.000-04:002009-04-13T18:48:00.000-04:00I like that. What would be your six word story?I like that. What would be your six word story?RedTreehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13435074189289863204noreply@blogger.com